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Monday, March 7, 2016

Cool Breeze - poetry / lyric - mobiustripz

Cool breeze blow my way,

Since shivers up my back,

Its such a hot and humid day,

I could have a heart attack.

Refresh my body with your gentle touch,

Blow wildly through my hair,

Pick me up with you,

I don't really care.

I trust you will do no harm,

I've met you few times before,

Brought me on a journey,

It felt good to explore.

Notes:

I think upon further review from the note below perhaps just keeping it youthful and pure and simple as it is works well enough because after all the years now 2015 and I wrote this in 1987 and I sure do miss those yesteryears when things were so simple. I might just keep it fresh and keep it simple as it originally was, why mess with a good thing? It also shows growth through experience when compared to other things I've written that have changed so much over the years. I've never been able to stop writing doesn't matter what's going on in my life one thing as consistent as I'm writing.

Dated May 25th 1987 - do some final editing makeup into song lyric and use a decent first here for a chorus.